Ransom! Chapter 9
Thank you so much to those who are still reading, and especially those who take the time to comment. This chapter puts a few more of the preliminary things behind us, and then next chapter we really...
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Keep thinking, Heath. Keep thinking, Jarrod. Listen to those voices. You'll figure it out eventually, though I suspect not TOO soon or we wouldn't have this wonderful story much longer. I do like...
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Another wonderful chapter. "Son. The word swelled inside his chest, threatening to burst forth in a flood of tears that she would continued to refer to him as her son." and "her maternal touch had...
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Great discusson between Victoria and Heath. Just how I would expect Victoria to be - sad and devastated but strong enough to handle what needs to be done.Now, it is time for someone to either look at...
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Wonderful chapter - as much as it hurts to read everyone's feelings, this story is so well written and I look forward to more!
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It was a touching chapter! And I'm sad for all of them. I would like so much they know the truth about Nick.
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Heath's intuition is at work - his feeling that he can't yet pin down. He will, though, he is very in tune with his family, more than he realizes.
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Heath should feel reassured that the family do not blame him..he only needlessly blames himself..but he and Jarrod should continue to talk things through and then go back to Sterling Junction where...
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This is wonderful. Both Jarrod and Heath feel that there is something they are missing - Nick’s gun, where the body was found? I’m sure it will click. This reminds me of the scene in MSMS when Nick...
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A very thoughtful chapter indeed. The conversation between Heath and Jarrod gave hope that the "something missing" will eventually be remembered and they'll find a way to help Nick. But the...
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I too feel bad that the characters are experiecing the pain that they are. The part about Coco missing Nick was very poignant, and it touched my heart. So glad that Jarrod and Heath are thinking.
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Ouch that hurt. The grief is so palpable. Together Jarrod & Heath will work it out. Hold on to the belief Nick is alive somewhere, Jarrod. - you don't know it yet but you are right.
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